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May 16, 2015
May 16, 2015 at 6:48 PM UTC
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WOW ! I CAN RELATE TO THAT ! Means --- Your poem solidifies all of my Preconceptions and prejudices and acts as armor and protection Against all the poets and poems Who are trying to ****** me into Thinking for myself and goading me on To change my ways // THANKS !! ---- ---- GREAT WRITE ! means --- The form of the poem was such that I was able To avoid Any real intrusion into my sanctuary Of its content I find the content of poems quite challenging And disturbing Like someone is trying to wake me up And insist that I too ! Am real .... ! ------- ------ CONGRATS ! YOU MADE THE DAILY !! Means ------ a poem is just a " selfie " Sexted to friends ! you sure looked cute in that one! lol...... ! --- --- ( what we are really telling each other ) --- Life is ****** I'm ****** You're ****** Everyone is ****** So Let's all eat **** and die
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jeffrey-robin
May 16, 2015
May 16, 2015 at 6:48 PM UTC
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