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It's not if, but when Each second builds pressure The clock ticking away till, Something snaps. It's not a matter of The Camels fate, But, Which straw will break, It's strained back? Something bad is going to happen, Maybe not now, Not today, But soon I can feel it in my heart, Every breath.
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May 1
May 1, 2026 at 12:08 AM UTC
The Camel Was Always Meant To Fall
It's not if, but when Each second builds pressure The clock ticking away till, Something snaps. It's not a matter of The Camels fate, But, Which straw will break, It's strained back? Something bad is going to happen, Maybe not now, Not today, But soon I can feel it in my heart, Every breath.
Not so fun fact: The first symptom of a wrong type blood transfusion is a sense of impending doom
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May 1
May 1, 2026 at 12:08 AM UTC
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