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Your poetry is like Liquorice Or Pernod Or Absinthe Believe me, I want it to be sweet Get me drunk Hallucinate But that ****** bitter taste Keeps coming up All I can feel is nauseous So, I put you back on the shelf Waiting for the next Charity shop run.
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Jun 24, 2019
Jun 24, 2019 at 11:49 AM UTC
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Your poetry is like Liquorice Or Pernod Or Absinthe Believe me, I want it to be sweet Get me drunk Hallucinate But that ****** bitter taste Keeps coming up All I can feel is nauseous So, I put you back on the shelf Waiting for the next Charity shop run.
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nigdaw
60/M/Essex, UK.
Jun 24, 2019
Jun 24, 2019 at 11:49 AM UTC
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