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Wreathed in kinetic wisps of fog, the trees achromatize, then re-emerge, verdant. Chi Gong students wave hands in clouds - no longer a metaphor, but this morning ...                                     breathable. Stillness envelops all until leaf blowers and edge clippers cleave the calmness with their sounds of domesticated gardens. As if defeated by the din, the fog retreats back towards the ocean, leaving but a token of itself shimmering on the grass. Glenna Duméy 10/22/11
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Dec 2, 2016
Dec 2, 2016 at 9:25 PM UTC
Saturday AM marine layer, Goose Egg Park, Santa Monica
Wreathed in kinetic wisps of fog, the trees achromatize, then re-emerge, verdant. Chi Gong students wave hands in clouds - no longer a metaphor, but this morning ...                                     breathable. Stillness envelops all until leaf blowers and edge clippers cleave the calmness with their sounds of domesticated gardens. As if defeated by the din, the fog retreats back towards the ocean, leaving but a token of itself shimmering on the grass. Glenna Duméy 10/22/11
Extraordinary experience, the only way to capture it was in a poem.
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Dec 2, 2016
Dec 2, 2016 at 9:25 PM UTC
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