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Today I felt something something so beautiful, something so angelic something so divine something so cosmic like it came right from the shrine Today i felt the drops, yes,they were the raindrops, no matter how they are welcomed welcomed with thunders, they still continue to be tiny pretty,little drops As i heard the lightning, i rushed outside, and just how beautifully, a few accumulated drops fell from the roof. that tipper - tapper , no jagger slowly fell on the railing. I just noticed their speed, how slow yet so fast I almost  hallucinated I could see them as a distorted man,sick of troubles of life falling from the rooftop and just when he collides with the railings. he gushes down,so down that he eventually bids adieu , the final adieu . Even before I could soak it in, i was thinking that drop,the tiny drop beared my weight and it fell and then mixed with the almost flood water. Rainwater,pure,angelic.   Now dangerous and muddy and impure. The drop didn't  have any idea,where its taking itself still it dropped down,and when it fell, the others decided to lose themselves too. then the other. and then the next. My mind went a million miles away but what it felt on my palm. that purity & coolness,I felt cold. suddenly,they fell with such a rush, and touched me, it got disturbed into a hundred other small droplets,some fell on my face blurring my glasses ... and wetting my face and hand, the cool drops now made me warm. so warm that the chill could no longer be felt. I could relax. I have always hater rains, like they were always a pain, i don't know why? but today felt like something else. but eventually after,giving me a moment of surprise and joy. it finally decided to die. how sad? how negative? how negative could my interpretations get?? i ponder why? ................................ ........................ ............... ....... ... Still WONDERING. oh dear, sigh !!
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Oct 26, 2013
Oct 26, 2013 at 9:38 AM UTC
The Fray in the rain...
Today I felt something something so beautiful, something so angelic something so divine something so cosmic like it came right from the shrine Today i felt the drops, yes,they were the raindrops, no matter how they are welcomed welcomed with thunders, they still continue to be tiny pretty,little drops As i heard the lightning, i rushed outside, and just how beautifully, a few accumulated drops fell from the roof. that tipper - tapper , no jagger slowly fell on the railing. I just noticed their speed, how slow yet so fast I almost  hallucinated I could see them as a distorted man,sick of troubles of life falling from the rooftop and just when he collides with the railings. he gushes down,so down that he eventually bids adieu , the final adieu . Even before I could soak it in, i was thinking that drop,the tiny drop beared my weight and it fell and then mixed with the almost flood water. Rainwater,pure,angelic.   Now dangerous and muddy and impure. The drop didn't  have any idea,where its taking itself still it dropped down,and when it fell, the others decided to lose themselves too. then the other. and then the next. My mind went a million miles away but what it felt on my palm. that purity & coolness,I felt cold. suddenly,they fell with such a rush, and touched me, it got disturbed into a hundred other small droplets,some fell on my face blurring my glasses ... and wetting my face and hand, the cool drops now made me warm. so warm that the chill could no longer be felt. I could relax. I have always hater rains, like they were always a pain, i don't know why? but today felt like something else. but eventually after,giving me a moment of surprise and joy. it finally decided to die. how sad? how negative? how negative could my interpretations get?? i ponder why? ................................ ........................ ............... ....... ... Still WONDERING. oh dear, sigh !!
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Oct 26, 2013
Oct 26, 2013 at 9:38 AM UTC
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