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My eyes just opened.. The ceiling fan was turning round and round .. Small breeze was making its noises I looked towards the window It was not the breeze but you .. Crying I was able to see your face in the moonlight.. The tears over your cheeks were visible.. I remembered of the accident.. Oh! as my eyes are opened I have survived the accident I wanted to come near you Hug you.. Kiss you.. And for all that I needed to get your attention I took a deep breath .. Closed my eyes for gaining some energy to call your name My eyes remained closed.....
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Aug 22, 2018
Aug 22, 2018 at 7:58 PM UTC
The accident
My eyes just opened.. The ceiling fan was turning round and round .. Small breeze was making its noises I looked towards the window It was not the breeze but you .. Crying I was able to see your face in the moonlight.. The tears over your cheeks were visible.. I remembered of the accident.. Oh! as my eyes are opened I have survived the accident I wanted to come near you Hug you.. Kiss you.. And for all that I needed to get your attention I took a deep breath .. Closed my eyes for gaining some energy to call your name My eyes remained closed.....
Love makes life live
avishkar1920
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18/M/India
Aug 22, 2018
Aug 22, 2018 at 7:58 PM UTC
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