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Razor sharp visions Prestige our living souls And advanced traditional morale Next, a path untraveled Contains a light within The human soul We have to walk In the light, not dark And continue our positive impulse
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Dec 15, 2014
Dec 15, 2014 at 11:22 AM UTC
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Razor sharp visions Prestige our living souls And advanced traditional morale Next, a path untraveled Contains a light within The human soul We have to walk In the light, not dark And continue our positive impulse
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Dec 15, 2014
Dec 15, 2014 at 11:22 AM UTC
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