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He left with the passing time no farewells offered no heartfelt backward glance his footfalls ticking seconds echoing in the Sunday parlours of the righteous he despised He left with the passing time no one mourned,no tears were shed His sacred, bleeding heart now but a tattooed image on the chests of the dejected He left with the passing time on whispers of myths and suspected tall tales doubting his own truth despising the lie of his creation He left with the passing time while pious mice sang of his glory behind the battlements of faith as the wars of the wicked raged in his name He left with the passing time while mothers wailed at shaken babes and the disappeared sang from **** choked graves He left with the passing time as society shunned his brand and drunken feet  danced lasciviously on his moral high ground He left, with the passing time...
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Jun 10, 2014
Jun 10, 2014 at 4:29 AM UTC
With the passing time
He left with the passing time no farewells offered no heartfelt backward glance his footfalls ticking seconds echoing in the Sunday parlours of the righteous he despised He left with the passing time no one mourned,no tears were shed His sacred, bleeding heart now but a tattooed image on the chests of the dejected He left with the passing time on whispers of myths and suspected tall tales doubting his own truth despising the lie of his creation He left with the passing time while pious mice sang of his glory behind the battlements of faith as the wars of the wicked raged in his name He left with the passing time while mothers wailed at shaken babes and the disappeared sang from **** choked graves He left with the passing time as society shunned his brand and drunken feet  danced lasciviously on his moral high ground He left, with the passing time...
My rather drunken write from last night, not sure if I'll edit it, remove it or bin it all together. Not sure I like it at all. Please leave feedback if you will, it would be greatly appreciated.
calpurnia-mockingbird
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Jun 10, 2014
Jun 10, 2014 at 4:29 AM UTC
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