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In a swirling of a whirling come together soft & warm We made something together it breathes a calm storm Remember that day we Metanoia turned into my you, Our churning heart, my soul, inside a lonely of a blue, After a mind turned mad beyond all thought we pray, A change in our very being deep in a wondering sway We orientally unwound moved a wild natured sprawl Meta in the evening different in the turning in our ball Sometimes we are a little weird in our strange dishevel Balanced on a razor's edge-the touch-we kiss-we bevel, Somewhere in that tension, break free, here today gone That slow to the deep becoming awakens in us a dawn- I feel that rock in you change across a forming of a land Despite it all maybe because of it I hold you in my hand
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Mar 25
Mar 25, 2026 at 8:06 AM UTC
In a Swirling of a Whirling
In a swirling of a whirling come together soft & warm We made something together it breathes a calm storm Remember that day we Metanoia turned into my you, Our churning heart, my soul, inside a lonely of a blue, After a mind turned mad beyond all thought we pray, A change in our very being deep in a wondering sway We orientally unwound moved a wild natured sprawl Meta in the evening different in the turning in our ball Sometimes we are a little weird in our strange dishevel Balanced on a razor's edge-the touch-we kiss-we bevel, Somewhere in that tension, break free, here today gone That slow to the deep becoming awakens in us a dawn- I feel that rock in you change across a forming of a land Despite it all maybe because of it I hold you in my hand
There are some things in us, maybe all things, that we cannot explain, and when we say it, the moment those words breathe form, it changes, and we are different, slide past the meaning, transform, become, something different as the swirl of the curls undo us into more.
DarrellBaughn
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62/M/Jackson, Mississippi
Mar 25
Mar 25, 2026 at 8:06 AM UTC
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