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he was a tin man ever shy in the shadow of snow and the asphalt encrusted with salt. i am a deaf mute in its cold sunshine thru the bare trees i am the writers reader caught up in the manyfold words bright and crisp on my stuttering tongue caught up in the beauty of the phrase wishing only for its tender workings on my pale lips caught in the web of light falling thru the bare trees by the christmas tree so forlorn in febuary wind... he was a soft spoken tin man ever shy in the shadow of snow and the asphalt encrusted with salt the turbulent sea of my dreams lashes line and sail with its icebound hand as i stray between the vision you wept in ink on page and the words you spoke soft as a kittens fur into my sleeping ear a spun tale thrashing against me i am shy with my eyes flirting with yours look away and recapture your gaze the asphalt at my feet stained with winters salt i leave my footprint behind and wander away into the field of rye swaying under a cold sun never to hear the tin man sing again after he was caught by the catcher in the rye
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Feb 3, 2017
Feb 3, 2017 at 8:25 PM UTC
broken tin man in field of rye
he was a tin man ever shy in the shadow of snow and the asphalt encrusted with salt. i am a deaf mute in its cold sunshine thru the bare trees i am the writers reader caught up in the manyfold words bright and crisp on my stuttering tongue caught up in the beauty of the phrase wishing only for its tender workings on my pale lips caught in the web of light falling thru the bare trees by the christmas tree so forlorn in febuary wind... he was a soft spoken tin man ever shy in the shadow of snow and the asphalt encrusted with salt the turbulent sea of my dreams lashes line and sail with its icebound hand as i stray between the vision you wept in ink on page and the words you spoke soft as a kittens fur into my sleeping ear a spun tale thrashing against me i am shy with my eyes flirting with yours look away and recapture your gaze the asphalt at my feet stained with winters salt i leave my footprint behind and wander away into the field of rye swaying under a cold sun never to hear the tin man sing again after he was caught by the catcher in the rye
(i didnt hear of John Lennon's death till the morning after his death)
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Feb 3, 2017
Feb 3, 2017 at 8:25 PM UTC
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