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Salt

Salt--

 

It was a taste on our tongues,

Mingled with sand and hermit *****

We weren't quite worth our weight in it.

 

It's a grit between out teeth tonight,

As we were chewing our lips.

A tinge of metallic warmth being gently seasoned.

 

Salt--

 

Rolling over in the mud of the coast,

Our clothes clung to us, too heavy.

We'll never get it out.

 

Salt--

 

We don't drink the water,

But we choke it down and wish it were air.

Just a few more mouthfuls and we'll be turned into

 

Salt.

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Dec 22, 2010
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(c) 2008- From I Don't Know These Words

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