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i was walking peacefully on the beach and suddenly there was a stinging at my feet. i looked down and saw the wind pulling the sand along "hurry" said the wind   in a sort of wooshing voice. the sand went as fast as it could go, stinging my helpless feet. sand comets i told myself. it felt like i was on a different planet mars maybe? even the tidal pools dried up of the stinging sand.
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Jul 17, 2011
Jul 17, 2011 at 9:16 AM UTC
Sand Comets
i was walking peacefully on the beach and suddenly there was a stinging at my feet. i looked down and saw the wind pulling the sand along "hurry" said the wind   in a sort of wooshing voice. the sand went as fast as it could go, stinging my helpless feet. sand comets i told myself. it felt like i was on a different planet mars maybe? even the tidal pools dried up of the stinging sand.
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Jul 17, 2011
Jul 17, 2011 at 9:16 AM UTC
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