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You were my world. All I think about now is how you used to make me smile. I drown in my sorrow when I’m low, and you were here for me. If only You were here all the time. You said such sweet things and threw away the inner critics haunting us as you were listening to how I felt everything was falling apart how I cared about you and Me, my words, and You ignored my flaws, picking on everybody else hating on us, never actually believing in what others said, taking in how I see you now Truth is You made me feel so deeply but that shouldn’t be possible and all I want is you, though I must confess, I’m stuck on if onlys Because unfortunately things have changed, read the lines from bottom to top to know more since this is a reversible poem
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Mar 1, 2025
Mar 1, 2025 at 7:02 PM UTC
You were my world
You were my world. All I think about now is how you used to make me smile. I drown in my sorrow when I’m low, and you were here for me. If only You were here all the time. You said such sweet things and threw away the inner critics haunting us as you were listening to how I felt everything was falling apart how I cared about you and Me, my words, and You ignored my flaws, picking on everybody else hating on us, never actually believing in what others said, taking in how I see you now Truth is You made me feel so deeply but that shouldn’t be possible and all I want is you, though I must confess, I’m stuck on if onlys Because unfortunately things have changed, read the lines from bottom to top to know more since this is a reversible poem
Feedback welcome! (This is my first time doing this!)
JayJay
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16/Vermont
Mar 1, 2025
Mar 1, 2025 at 7:02 PM UTC
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