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our peak in love was like a white jumbo jet huge and bright floating high in the blue sky clouds beneath like soft pillows, endless, we saw nothing of the earth, only the vast above, and we were both pilots, both steering one fragile pretty thing toward some imagined destination, and then, fire, sudden, merciless fire falling, tearing, breaking, burning, down in flames it came, ashes on the ground, ashes in our mouths, and nothing left, as if we had never flown, as if we had never been.
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Sep 23, 2025
Sep 23, 2025 at 10:43 AM UTC
Ashes of love
our peak in love was like a white jumbo jet huge and bright floating high in the blue sky clouds beneath like soft pillows, endless, we saw nothing of the earth, only the vast above, and we were both pilots, both steering one fragile pretty thing toward some imagined destination, and then, fire, sudden, merciless fire falling, tearing, breaking, burning, down in flames it came, ashes on the ground, ashes in our mouths, and nothing left, as if we had never flown, as if we had never been.
A love that once flew high and bright ends suddenly in fire and ash, leaving nothing behind.
Muhammad_Sami_Sadiq
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Sep 23, 2025
Sep 23, 2025 at 10:43 AM UTC
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