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The moment that changed everything was, at best, unremarkable. It was empty and plain, pale when set beside life's great saturation. However, within this subtle shift, something important happened. Now, important things happen all the time, but this one was different. This one meant something. Because I saw it. Unremarkable, empty, plain, pale, and subtle, but still there. A weak force. Gravity, in modern physics, is a weak force. Likewise this moment was weak, but it was gravity. It tore my life from its standing and all at once I was new. For a fleeting moment I was a witness. A witness to who I could be, who we all could be. Then the path before me opened, and I saw the world for the first time. Opportunities I thought were gone were not, places I thought I could not go I did. And now I understand. I understand, that moments do not have to be remarkable, to change everything.
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Sep 14, 2017
Sep 14, 2017 at 10:32 PM UTC
The Moment
The moment that changed everything was, at best, unremarkable. It was empty and plain, pale when set beside life's great saturation. However, within this subtle shift, something important happened. Now, important things happen all the time, but this one was different. This one meant something. Because I saw it. Unremarkable, empty, plain, pale, and subtle, but still there. A weak force. Gravity, in modern physics, is a weak force. Likewise this moment was weak, but it was gravity. It tore my life from its standing and all at once I was new. For a fleeting moment I was a witness. A witness to who I could be, who we all could be. Then the path before me opened, and I saw the world for the first time. Opportunities I thought were gone were not, places I thought I could not go I did. And now I understand. I understand, that moments do not have to be remarkable, to change everything.
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Sep 14, 2017
Sep 14, 2017 at 10:32 PM UTC
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