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Another beer stained sunday

Another beer stained Sunday

Writing ,thinking and talking to myself

Sometimes I'm a good listener

But other times I just argue with my thoughts

I'm an ******* I think as I take a sip

Some of my critics would agree I respond

Those critics give me fire I mumble

The ones who need a formula

The ones who haven't been completely broke

Broke and giving up everything for the work

The art,

The ones who haven't lost anything

Or everything like I had done

Searching for the words,the voice

Oh well I wish them luck,I think

As I take another sip

Do you really wish them well?

I question myself

I think I do I say.

You've gone mad I exclaim

As I pace the floor relentlessly

Mad,Im more sane than ever

I'm quick to reply

I'm disagreeing with you after all

You wanted to keep things safe

Nice and easy with no risks

But I challenged you

When you wanted to fold

You're an ******* I think as I take a sip

On another beer stained Sunday.

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Dec 4, 2012
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