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He could pack his whole life into a guitar case because there was no guitar in it. I was there on the day it broke - smashed against the wall all wood and pointless strings destroyed like forgotten dreams. The bottle of whiskey on the dresser was the only thing that made it real the bottles cool touch to sooth the burn as he drank it hot and cold - familiar turmoil. I sat on his bed wearing only his jumper, it smelled like an ashtray that was gifted with him He saw straight through me the world now a different place It's harshness had peaked and life a disgrace So he made a quick rollie and packed up his life walked straight from that room and away from his life.
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Jul 24, 2015
Jul 24, 2015 at 10:50 AM UTC
Wood and Strings
He could pack his whole life into a guitar case because there was no guitar in it. I was there on the day it broke - smashed against the wall all wood and pointless strings destroyed like forgotten dreams. The bottle of whiskey on the dresser was the only thing that made it real the bottles cool touch to sooth the burn as he drank it hot and cold - familiar turmoil. I sat on his bed wearing only his jumper, it smelled like an ashtray that was gifted with him He saw straight through me the world now a different place It's harshness had peaked and life a disgrace So he made a quick rollie and packed up his life walked straight from that room and away from his life.
lou-mcnamara
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Jul 24, 2015
Jul 24, 2015 at 10:50 AM UTC
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