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All I see, my lotus flower Sad to see our love gone soured Yours was mine and mine alone Expect it wasn’t - should  have known My love for you, too much you said You knew me, amongst the rest My luck down, my sadness found My heart bled, externally read All in all my lotus flower Sad to see our love went soured Your voice, an angel found it’s home My feelings made - hardly known   But you left your notice made Off you went, came my pain And as you walked away from me My heart bled red internally
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Jul 24, 2023
Jul 24, 2023 at 11:10 AM UTC
(L)otus Flower
All I see, my lotus flower Sad to see our love gone soured Yours was mine and mine alone Expect it wasn’t - should  have known My love for you, too much you said You knew me, amongst the rest My luck down, my sadness found My heart bled, externally read All in all my lotus flower Sad to see our love went soured Your voice, an angel found it’s home My feelings made - hardly known   But you left your notice made Off you went, came my pain And as you walked away from me My heart bled red internally
The first is the worst.
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18/M/Australia
Jul 24, 2023
Jul 24, 2023 at 11:10 AM UTC
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