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if i ever came close to belonging, this must be the spot. the place where failures and friends collect like the white cloudy residue on the bank of a river, stuck, wanting to escape, giving anything to flow again down life's fast and unforgiving current, being endlessly turned and turned in one spot, moving but stuck. accumulating next to your white filmy comrads who also got caught in the whirlpool trap going nowhere. going home.
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Mar 23, 2013
Mar 23, 2013 at 8:18 PM UTC
Going Home
if i ever came close to belonging, this must be the spot. the place where failures and friends collect like the white cloudy residue on the bank of a river, stuck, wanting to escape, giving anything to flow again down life's fast and unforgiving current, being endlessly turned and turned in one spot, moving but stuck. accumulating next to your white filmy comrads who also got caught in the whirlpool trap going nowhere. going home.
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Mar 23, 2013
Mar 23, 2013 at 8:18 PM UTC
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