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Unmelted candle wax From two hundred melted candles Litters a granite counter top The metaphorical resonances of which Were lost three weeks ago When the counter swam like water In hallucinogenic bliss, As through knowing each other more, not less, We fell finally all the way out of the love Which once seemed so much more solid Than water
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Sep 15, 2013
Sep 15, 2013 at 12:50 PM UTC
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Unmelted candle wax From two hundred melted candles Litters a granite counter top The metaphorical resonances of which Were lost three weeks ago When the counter swam like water In hallucinogenic bliss, As through knowing each other more, not less, We fell finally all the way out of the love Which once seemed so much more solid Than water
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Sep 15, 2013
Sep 15, 2013 at 12:50 PM UTC
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