The first time I saw Malibu
& all those California girls,
in all forms of bikinis,
watching the surfer dudes
catching waves,
I found new meaning
to the phrase 'good vibrations'
& almost immediately,
I thought we should
replace the 'good'
with the word 'great',
for it was truly paradise.
Sep 6, 2014
Sep 6, 2014 at 7:40 PM UTC
The first time I saw Malibu
& all those California girls,
in all forms of bikinis,
watching the surfer dudes
catching waves,
I found new meaning
to the phrase 'good vibrations'
& almost immediately,
I thought we should
replace the 'good'
with the word 'great',
for it was truly paradise.
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