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I do not want to pile on, But I am in sweet pain, Just below the belt... Pain due to nervousness, My dad was unwell, He got successfully operated... He's my dear guardian Angel, Sustained injury whilst protecting me, I escaped with minor gashes. He's undoubtedly the best father, There may be any trouble on me, But he's always standing on guard. I strive to make my father feel proud, And though I often fail to make him feel so, I shall not give up hope that I shall make him feel proud. Right now, I am in pain, I am unable to urinate. But this pain is bearable, I shall now help him recover, My life is his blessings all over.
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Sep 29, 2018
Sep 29, 2018 at 3:51 PM UTC
Retention is the Tension (Lighthearted)
I do not want to pile on, But I am in sweet pain, Just below the belt... Pain due to nervousness, My dad was unwell, He got successfully operated... He's my dear guardian Angel, Sustained injury whilst protecting me, I escaped with minor gashes. He's undoubtedly the best father, There may be any trouble on me, But he's always standing on guard. I strive to make my father feel proud, And though I often fail to make him feel so, I shall not give up hope that I shall make him feel proud. Right now, I am in pain, I am unable to urinate. But this pain is bearable, I shall now help him recover, My life is his blessings all over.
Maybe due to the subconscious tension about my father's recent surgery, I am unable to urinate after the morning bath but it will be alright. Nothing scares me after my tete-a-tete with death for the 28 days in the comatose state and then the utterly painful but necessary physiotherapy. These bothersome little troubles are not something that I should be worried about now. https://www.amazon.com/dp/aw/B00MYY0DMA My HP Poem #1723 ©Atul Kaushal
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Sep 29, 2018
Sep 29, 2018 at 3:51 PM UTC
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