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They built the rhinoceros because God foretold of coming war in which they'd need sanctuary from the evil unthawed beasts Earth's burning would hellishly unleash. They built him of steel and electronics, infused with a human intelligence, and huddled raw within like unmade bricks within a kiln, until their God dispensed His justice: No escape / the heat turned on They baked / the devil-beasts of *****
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Sep 14, 2020
Sep 14, 2020 at 1:33 PM UTC
God's Chosen People
They built the rhinoceros because God foretold of coming war in which they'd need sanctuary from the evil unthawed beasts Earth's burning would hellishly unleash. They built him of steel and electronics, infused with a human intelligence, and huddled raw within like unmade bricks within a kiln, until their God dispensed His justice: No escape / the heat turned on They baked / the devil-beasts of *****
Inspired by Vladimir Kush's painting "Trojan Horse" and playing around with traditional sonnet form. This is my attempt at an instasonnet (everything on IG is shorter, right?), reduced from 14 lines (ABAB CDCD EFEF GG) to 10 lines (ABAB CDCD EE).
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Sep 14, 2020
Sep 14, 2020 at 1:33 PM UTC
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