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As I sit quietly in nature, So still that she mistakes me for her own reflection, I see her in her private room. My stillness dissolves the separation — unfogging the window between us. Here. Still. Observing. I see her stripped of effort, Dancing in her underwear, Singing from the depths of her heart — Hair loose. Barefoot. And as I sit, still, I begin to feel my own seams loosen.
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Mar 2
Mar 2, 2026 at 2:46 AM UTC
Dissolve
As I sit quietly in nature, So still that she mistakes me for her own reflection, I see her in her private room. My stillness dissolves the separation — unfogging the window between us. Here. Still. Observing. I see her stripped of effort, Dancing in her underwear, Singing from the depths of her heart — Hair loose. Barefoot. And as I sit, still, I begin to feel my own seams loosen.
Sometimes sitting outside for hours on end is the most my productive time... this is the result :)
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Mar 2
Mar 2, 2026 at 2:46 AM UTC
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