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---$---$--- Hi there! Want to be my friend? I'm a very popular girl! Welcome to my dream! Welcome to my world! First of all we'll have to change Your clothing and your hair. I'll put on your makeup. Right now you're just so... bare! Now... you'll need to say some things... I'll prompt you. Just recieve. Cuz right now your conversation Is silly and naive. Those friends of yours? They're LOSERS. They are not OK. Just think and talk like one of us... ... we're happy as can be! You have another problem. That POETRY lacks class. Just take all that writing and throw it in the trash. See! Now that you are not yourself Now that you're unkind Now that you're my Queen Bee drone and you don't have a MIND... You are My Creation! Oh, c'mon... don't be blue... We welcome you to Stepford... ... where you're no longer YOU. SoulSurvivor (C) 5/22/2013
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Feb 8, 2015
Feb 8, 2015 at 3:35 PM UTC
HI THERE !!!
---$---$--- Hi there! Want to be my friend? I'm a very popular girl! Welcome to my dream! Welcome to my world! First of all we'll have to change Your clothing and your hair. I'll put on your makeup. Right now you're just so... bare! Now... you'll need to say some things... I'll prompt you. Just recieve. Cuz right now your conversation Is silly and naive. Those friends of yours? They're LOSERS. They are not OK. Just think and talk like one of us... ... we're happy as can be! You have another problem. That POETRY lacks class. Just take all that writing and throw it in the trash. See! Now that you are not yourself Now that you're unkind Now that you're my Queen Bee drone and you don't have a MIND... You are My Creation! Oh, c'mon... don't be blue... We welcome you to Stepford... ... where you're no longer YOU. SoulSurvivor (C) 5/22/2013
I suggest you listen to: Edie Brickwell & The New Bohemians "What I Am" as you read this. https://www.youtube.com/watch? v=tDl3bdE3YQA It's PERFECT. If you are not familiar with my Reference to "Stepford" rent Movies made in the 70s. The Stepford Wives The Stepford Children I would recommend the first. It's better. I won't tell you the Plot as that would spoil the fun... ---$---$---
SoulSurvivor
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Feb 8, 2015
Feb 8, 2015 at 3:35 PM UTC
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