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Our love was slow-roasting. If we were chicken, it would have fallen off the bone. I can see now, on this night with it's moon as silky as freshly laundered sheets, that all I cared for was small. And that my thinking them small made them all the smaller. There's no one to blame but me. This, I now can see.
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Apr 27, 2018
Apr 27, 2018 at 9:59 PM UTC
Slow-Roasting
Our love was slow-roasting. If we were chicken, it would have fallen off the bone. I can see now, on this night with it's moon as silky as freshly laundered sheets, that all I cared for was small. And that my thinking them small made them all the smaller. There's no one to blame but me. This, I now can see.
Feedback and notes for improvement are always appreciated! I'd like to fill in the middle, but I don't quite know how yet.
JoBarb
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Apr 27, 2018
Apr 27, 2018 at 9:59 PM UTC
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