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RACHEL AND YOU AND THE DAY TRIP.

It was a day trip out

to some seaside place

arranged by the Gospel church

for kids whose parents

 

were poor

and having got on the coach

you sat in a seat

by the window

 

and waved at your mother

standing on the pavement

along Rockingham Street

and she waved back

 

then this girl sat beside you

who you didn’t know

and she smiled and said

all right if I sit here?

 

sure

you said

and looked back out

at your mother

 

and waved again

and she waved back

and you thought

who is this girl?

 

and why is she

sitting next to me?

and she looked at out

the window

 

and waved to her mother

who started talking

to your mother

and they both waved back

 

to you and the girl

and you said

do you want to sit

by the window?

 

and she said

ok yes that’d be nice

and so she got out

and you got out

 

then she got in

and sat

by the window

and you sat

 

down beside her

and then the coach

started up

and drove off

 

and you both waved

at your mothers

until they were out of sight

and the girl turned

 

and said

I’m Rachel

this is my first time

to the seaside

 

and you said

you can walk around

with me if you want to

and she said

 

that’d be good

I don’t know

anyone else here

and so she did

 

all day

walked around with you

along the beach

and on the sands

 

making sandcastles

and in the cafe

where they took you all

for a meal

 

of fish and chips

and she talked

and talked

and smiled

 

and laughed

and once she took

hold of your hand

and it seemed

 

for a while

that she was happy

at least it seemed so

by the width of her smile.

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Written by
terry-collett
English
Published
Oct 31, 2012
Lines·Words
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A BOY AND GIRL AND THE DAY TRIP TO THE SEASIDE IN THE 1950S

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