Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
You notice… The light bend in your seven ***** as your thumb cramps fidgeting. You notice… The small tear she wears on her fishnets as she glides by, reloading your glass. Your notice… The couple celebrating across the labyrinth as you hope–and swear–you’re up next. You notice… The way the gentleman smirks as he unfurls a loaded hand. You even notice… Your eyes now have to squint as you move your jeff cap to shield the rising sun. It’s pulling upwards, bleeding its colors, spewing its rays as it sears through the lonely window. But with your anchored gaze, You don’t notice it at all.
0
Jun 7, 2025
Jun 7, 2025 at 5:07 AM UTC
Notice
You notice… The light bend in your seven ***** as your thumb cramps fidgeting. You notice… The small tear she wears on her fishnets as she glides by, reloading your glass. Your notice… The couple celebrating across the labyrinth as you hope–and swear–you’re up next. You notice… The way the gentleman smirks as he unfurls a loaded hand. You even notice… Your eyes now have to squint as you move your jeff cap to shield the rising sun. It’s pulling upwards, bleeding its colors, spewing its rays as it sears through the lonely window. But with your anchored gaze, You don’t notice it at all.
about going through the motions, not utilizing the full potential of our awareness
FallingAwake
Written by
32/F/USA
Jun 7, 2025
Jun 7, 2025 at 5:07 AM UTC
Request permission to use this poem