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It was his birthday, his fourtyninth year, sat at his computer, he hadn't a clue. Our son placed her on his chest without fear, but, his big hands, didn't know what to do. She looked up at him, with eyes dark and clear. He fumbled to hold her, his discomfort grew. She gave a big yawn, then gave a small belch. I could see, that his smile, he tried to squelch. He turned his attention then to our son, who pointed at me, trying to shift blame. Said, "Maybe you'll tell me just what you've done!" "Happy Birthday" we cried, playing the game. She then licked his thumb, with her pink tongue, He tried to look stern, but his heart she did tame. With her tiny black nose, she gave a shove and just like that, he was in puppy love. **Authors note: This little 1/2 pound Chihuahua melted his heart and let him love a dog once more. Not since our Siberian Husky died over 8 years ago, had he even looked at another dog. "Precious" allowed him to love anew without fear of a broken heart once again.
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Dec 17, 2010
Dec 17, 2010 at 12:37 PM UTC
His Precious Gift
It was his birthday, his fourtyninth year, sat at his computer, he hadn't a clue. Our son placed her on his chest without fear, but, his big hands, didn't know what to do. She looked up at him, with eyes dark and clear. He fumbled to hold her, his discomfort grew. She gave a big yawn, then gave a small belch. I could see, that his smile, he tried to squelch. He turned his attention then to our son, who pointed at me, trying to shift blame. Said, "Maybe you'll tell me just what you've done!" "Happy Birthday" we cried, playing the game. She then licked his thumb, with her pink tongue, He tried to look stern, but his heart she did tame. With her tiny black nose, she gave a shove and just like that, he was in puppy love. **Authors note: This little 1/2 pound Chihuahua melted his heart and let him love a dog once more. Not since our Siberian Husky died over 8 years ago, had he even looked at another dog. "Precious" allowed him to love anew without fear of a broken heart once again.
This is written in the form: Ottava Rima. It incorporates a rhyme scheeme of abababcc, dededeff and so on.
paula-swanson
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Dec 17, 2010
Dec 17, 2010 at 12:37 PM UTC
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