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I hadn't had one of my funny visionary type dreams in a long while As I lay in bed I closed my eyes Then suddenly I found myself in a ditch, it was nightime, the moon was shining above There was a big **** there, I said to myself "I should pluck that weed" Then I thought I should get out of this ditch as there might be rats around at night There was this high vegetation boxing me in, tall grass or something I thought "But I don't have tall grass" I pushed my way through it and discovered it wasn't my garden at all There was a long path down to this house that was all lit up I thought to myself "It's one of those strange dreams again" I started to move up the path In a vision you don't have legs as such You're just like an eye looking out But you can move or float along You always look for a signpost to see where you are What is this place ? Where am I ? Normally you don't ever find one When I got to the house I saw that there was other houses attached, it was like the way into a little village I said to myself "I'll go down here and turn the corner, might find what this village is As I'm walking/ floating down to the corner A man on a bicycle passes me, he doesn't acknowledge my presence at all It's like I'm the Invisible Man I start to get this funny Christmascy feeling coming over me When I turn the corner there's this Inn or hostelry of some kind and there's lots of people inside It's like there's a party going on I think "I'll go in here and maybe I'll be able to talk to someone" Near the door there's these three pretty girls Their like waitresses Their wearing low cut dresses at the front Some of their backs are a bit bare too near the top Normally in a vision if I meet someone I'll ask them for help I'll say I'm stressed out back in my own world Can you help me Normally they won't help you, they'll say something unintelligible or look at you kind of scared or funny like This time I say 'Feck it, I'm not going to ask them for anything, these are pretty girls This girl on the right, you know what I'm going to do, I'm going to reach around and start tickling her on the back and see what happens" Normally in my visions you don't have hands or feet, you feel like you're just an eye looking out...there's no mirrors so you don't know what you are, what you look like But when I reach out my arm I suddenly find that yes! I have an arm and I have fingers as well So I start tickling her on the back, at first she starts to smile and then she starts to burst out laughing But she doesn't turn to look at me or acknowledge me in any way Suddenly one of the other girl's faces starts to change, change into something strange and scary looking I have to recall my protective mantra, a short line I use that makes me feel protected I draw it like a sword and I throw it at this scary thing Again it changes into something else Soon after I awake and I write this...about the experience.
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Dec 12, 2025
Dec 12, 2025 at 10:29 PM UTC
Pretty girls in a vision (Night fishing)
I hadn't had one of my funny visionary type dreams in a long while As I lay in bed I closed my eyes Then suddenly I found myself in a ditch, it was nightime, the moon was shining above There was a big **** there, I said to myself "I should pluck that weed" Then I thought I should get out of this ditch as there might be rats around at night There was this high vegetation boxing me in, tall grass or something I thought "But I don't have tall grass" I pushed my way through it and discovered it wasn't my garden at all There was a long path down to this house that was all lit up I thought to myself "It's one of those strange dreams again" I started to move up the path In a vision you don't have legs as such You're just like an eye looking out But you can move or float along You always look for a signpost to see where you are What is this place ? Where am I ? Normally you don't ever find one When I got to the house I saw that there was other houses attached, it was like the way into a little village I said to myself "I'll go down here and turn the corner, might find what this village is As I'm walking/ floating down to the corner A man on a bicycle passes me, he doesn't acknowledge my presence at all It's like I'm the Invisible Man I start to get this funny Christmascy feeling coming over me When I turn the corner there's this Inn or hostelry of some kind and there's lots of people inside It's like there's a party going on I think "I'll go in here and maybe I'll be able to talk to someone" Near the door there's these three pretty girls Their like waitresses Their wearing low cut dresses at the front Some of their backs are a bit bare too near the top Normally in a vision if I meet someone I'll ask them for help I'll say I'm stressed out back in my own world Can you help me Normally they won't help you, they'll say something unintelligible or look at you kind of scared or funny like This time I say 'Feck it, I'm not going to ask them for anything, these are pretty girls This girl on the right, you know what I'm going to do, I'm going to reach around and start tickling her on the back and see what happens" Normally in my visions you don't have hands or feet, you feel like you're just an eye looking out...there's no mirrors so you don't know what you are, what you look like But when I reach out my arm I suddenly find that yes! I have an arm and I have fingers as well So I start tickling her on the back, at first she starts to smile and then she starts to burst out laughing But she doesn't turn to look at me or acknowledge me in any way Suddenly one of the other girl's faces starts to change, change into something strange and scary looking I have to recall my protective mantra, a short line I use that makes me feel protected I draw it like a sword and I throw it at this scary thing Again it changes into something else Soon after I awake and I write this...about the experience.
Like an instruction manual for visions LoL. Hope I'm not arrested for this, I might be wanted on the Astral Plane.
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62/M/Ireland
Dec 12, 2025
Dec 12, 2025 at 10:29 PM UTC
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