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Soft toffee in wrappers in a bag in my hand just take one Ingrid looks at the bag then at me they are yours I can share no problem I tell her she takes one and untwists the wrapper on the sweet takes it out and eats it I watch her her slightly protruding teeth bite through soft toffee quite easy I eat mine put the bag of toffees in my coat my uncle gives me sweets she tells me if I’m good and do things I study her brown hair pinned with grips her brown eyes looking sad do what things? I ask her she looks down at her shoes I can't say Uncle says it's secret between us the uncle visits her at weekends her old man's big brother gormless *** Jimmy says who's seen him in the Square why secret? I inquire cross my heart hope to die she replies wonder why?
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Dec 8, 2014
Dec 8, 2014 at 2:30 PM UTC
WONDER WHY?
Soft toffee in wrappers in a bag in my hand just take one Ingrid looks at the bag then at me they are yours I can share no problem I tell her she takes one and untwists the wrapper on the sweet takes it out and eats it I watch her her slightly protruding teeth bite through soft toffee quite easy I eat mine put the bag of toffees in my coat my uncle gives me sweets she tells me if I’m good and do things I study her brown hair pinned with grips her brown eyes looking sad do what things? I ask her she looks down at her shoes I can't say Uncle says it's secret between us the uncle visits her at weekends her old man's big brother gormless *** Jimmy says who's seen him in the Square why secret? I inquire cross my heart hope to die she replies wonder why?
AN 8 YEAR OLD BOY AND GIRL IN LONDON IN 1950S
terry-collett
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Dec 8, 2014
Dec 8, 2014 at 2:30 PM UTC
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