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All my life I've been in pain Lacking sunshine, just cold rain Then you entered my world one day And all the rainclouds blew away.
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Dec 14, 2025
Dec 14, 2025 at 8:53 PM UTC
Someone Changed My Weather
All my life I've been in pain Lacking sunshine, just cold rain Then you entered my world one day And all the rainclouds blew away.
I don't actually remember writing this. In fact the last line was originally written with an additional syllable, (And all the rainclouds just blew away). Which I thought sounded fine, but it seemed to flow better without the word "just." The date on the page of the spiral bound notebook I wrote it in bears the date: Sunday 4:23pm 8-21-2005. It's nothing very special, but I like it enough to post it. Bless y'all!
casey-thomas-mcclain
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Dec 14, 2025
Dec 14, 2025 at 8:53 PM UTC
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