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As I open the door The cold engulfs me first raising hairs on my neck, shivers down my spine, prickles on my scalp Next the smell so mild, pleasant, crisp. similar to rain or dew my lungs take in this air for the first time The light begins to peek over the mountains clearing the fog, cutting away the dark The quiet is both a comfort and an uneasiness Only the earth under my feet whispers as I walk the dirt path The lake unblemished, like a mirror for the sky to look upon no wind, no waves, no life standing there, absorbing the surroundings I am the one to break the silence, to shatter the utopia as I drop the pebble in the waters… these ripples go on                                                              Forever
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Oct 14, 2014
Oct 14, 2014 at 11:48 AM UTC
Overwhelmed
As I open the door The cold engulfs me first raising hairs on my neck, shivers down my spine, prickles on my scalp Next the smell so mild, pleasant, crisp. similar to rain or dew my lungs take in this air for the first time The light begins to peek over the mountains clearing the fog, cutting away the dark The quiet is both a comfort and an uneasiness Only the earth under my feet whispers as I walk the dirt path The lake unblemished, like a mirror for the sky to look upon no wind, no waves, no life standing there, absorbing the surroundings I am the one to break the silence, to shatter the utopia as I drop the pebble in the waters… these ripples go on                                                              Forever
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Oct 14, 2014
Oct 14, 2014 at 11:48 AM UTC
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