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Look at us, black, white, and all colors alike Sitting around, and thinking of life The beautiful colors, and when they'll all fade The day we fall into a slumber, from which we won't awake We'll slip and we'll fall, we will rest alone Surrounded by a world unknown Silent as the past now fades Brings you down, as you cry and ache Do give up, please let go For those colors will soon fade, I know. Yet if somehow you do awaken Don't be surprised to see the world mistaken Broken down and rearranged The people in it, now deranged the colors once so bright and bold Have faded out, and remain no more The beauty of it all is gone You realize you don't belong But don't give up, or walk away For the colors will return one day
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Oct 2, 2014
Oct 2, 2014 at 8:36 AM UTC
If You Wake Up
Look at us, black, white, and all colors alike Sitting around, and thinking of life The beautiful colors, and when they'll all fade The day we fall into a slumber, from which we won't awake We'll slip and we'll fall, we will rest alone Surrounded by a world unknown Silent as the past now fades Brings you down, as you cry and ache Do give up, please let go For those colors will soon fade, I know. Yet if somehow you do awaken Don't be surprised to see the world mistaken Broken down and rearranged The people in it, now deranged the colors once so bright and bold Have faded out, and remain no more The beauty of it all is gone You realize you don't belong But don't give up, or walk away For the colors will return one day
This began as a simple poem I was writing for english class, and turned into something more for me. It is explaining suiccide, overdosing, and depression. It is talking about how at first everything is so amazing, and beautiful in life, however that thought of giving up is always lingers in your mind. For some it's very powerful, causing them to over time, become weaker and fall apart more and more until they are unable to continue. Pushed to the brink, and near the end. Then it goes on to say that when you're at your lowest, you need to think about the light at the end of the tunnel. And some of you might say it's not there, but i'm telling you; If it's not there yet, it will be soon. You just need to hold on to see it.
kyle-jacob
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Oct 2, 2014
Oct 2, 2014 at 8:36 AM UTC
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