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A thick mist crawled inches above the basin, Fluidly and slowly creeping The breeze carried the eerie cries of crickets Inharmoniously welcoming you to their lair And as you breathe the humid air muffled by a pungent odor Like onions rotting from the inside out You’re shivering while the trees dance in unison Swaying naked in the blue moonlight In the center of the basin the water begins to ripple Forming little circles, growing infinitely It’s birthing now; the head crowning From the water she is born, unusually beautiful Plants tangled in her wicked black hair Eyelids flutter above protruding cheekbones Her lips; luscious and sinister Then your heart stops, flesh piercing inversely   And from her lips the words leak, dripping like sap                             I love you
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Feb 16, 2014
Feb 16, 2014 at 1:35 PM UTC
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A thick mist crawled inches above the basin, Fluidly and slowly creeping The breeze carried the eerie cries of crickets Inharmoniously welcoming you to their lair And as you breathe the humid air muffled by a pungent odor Like onions rotting from the inside out You’re shivering while the trees dance in unison Swaying naked in the blue moonlight In the center of the basin the water begins to ripple Forming little circles, growing infinitely It’s birthing now; the head crowning From the water she is born, unusually beautiful Plants tangled in her wicked black hair Eyelids flutter above protruding cheekbones Her lips; luscious and sinister Then your heart stops, flesh piercing inversely   And from her lips the words leak, dripping like sap                             I love you
© 2014 Bilal Kaci
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Feb 16, 2014
Feb 16, 2014 at 1:35 PM UTC
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