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It started with a few strokes, a pointed charcoal, pulsed...led by the thumb and index finger, that initiated a sway of arcs, the contours of boyish hair, clinging to the nape a few short strands on a not so wide forehead, very near...........a pair of not so bushy eyebrows, under which stared...peeping, smiling almond-shaped, brown eyes. then...followed gentle strokes of perfect highs and lows of a medium-bridged nose. ::::: hills, valleys, and softened arcs shaped and manifested character- high cheekbones....a pointed, but softened chin, suddenly, i was looking at sensual, full, pouting, luscious lips. ::::: index finger covered tip, to help define jaws....then slid down lower, a slick, slender neck appeared, propped up by a shallow clavicle and gently shaped  shoulders, that fool judging eyes and minds they seem small, and weak and fragile, but, they can carry tons of worries...determinedly. ::::: fingers angled, pencil tip slowly danced...in careful strokes, and curved lines, artfully creating a valley, 'tween two heavenly mountains, with pinkish brown crowns conspicuously tensed at the tops... pencil moved decidedly....so sure...but, slow in shaping waist...then curved on rounded hips..sliding inwards to the front.....to a central point, essential, fundamental, umbilical. its surroundings raised, as if to protect a knotted cord...filled with stories...closed, atop a slightly fleshy belly... from there, a short distance downward, led to a hidden flower the reason...a cradle...a port, covered by a triangular shield, squeezed in between chubby thighs and legs. ::::: lines went lower, narrower... shaped a pair of fair feet, with painted toes ably supporting a bare maiden :::::::::::: wonderfully sketched, ::::::::: in deep charcoal. ::::: Sally Copyright July 30, 2017 Rosalia Rosario A. Bayan
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Jul 29, 2017
Jul 29, 2017 at 10:37 PM UTC
Charcoal
It started with a few strokes, a pointed charcoal, pulsed...led by the thumb and index finger, that initiated a sway of arcs, the contours of boyish hair, clinging to the nape a few short strands on a not so wide forehead, very near...........a pair of not so bushy eyebrows, under which stared...peeping, smiling almond-shaped, brown eyes. then...followed gentle strokes of perfect highs and lows of a medium-bridged nose. ::::: hills, valleys, and softened arcs shaped and manifested character- high cheekbones....a pointed, but softened chin, suddenly, i was looking at sensual, full, pouting, luscious lips. ::::: index finger covered tip, to help define jaws....then slid down lower, a slick, slender neck appeared, propped up by a shallow clavicle and gently shaped  shoulders, that fool judging eyes and minds they seem small, and weak and fragile, but, they can carry tons of worries...determinedly. ::::: fingers angled, pencil tip slowly danced...in careful strokes, and curved lines, artfully creating a valley, 'tween two heavenly mountains, with pinkish brown crowns conspicuously tensed at the tops... pencil moved decidedly....so sure...but, slow in shaping waist...then curved on rounded hips..sliding inwards to the front.....to a central point, essential, fundamental, umbilical. its surroundings raised, as if to protect a knotted cord...filled with stories...closed, atop a slightly fleshy belly... from there, a short distance downward, led to a hidden flower the reason...a cradle...a port, covered by a triangular shield, squeezed in between chubby thighs and legs. ::::: lines went lower, narrower... shaped a pair of fair feet, with painted toes ably supporting a bare maiden :::::::::::: wonderfully sketched, ::::::::: in deep charcoal. ::::: Sally Copyright July 30, 2017 Rosalia Rosario A. Bayan
...just dabbled...then wrote...
sally-a-bayan
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F/Filipino
Jul 29, 2017
Jul 29, 2017 at 10:37 PM UTC
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