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When judgments are believed to be facts, Especially our own judgments About ourselves, They have great weight and mass, They can crush us like cannon ***** Imprison us like concrete walls. But when we see them For what really they are, Mere thoughts, Often chronic opinions of ourselves, (Perhaps spawned by the Opinions of fools?) Seemingly solid as rock, yet Grounded in nothing, They have no weight, They have no mass, They cannot hurt, nor Imprison us. They are no more dangerous than Snowflakes on our noses, No more confining than A morning fog.
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May 28, 2014
May 28, 2014 at 10:49 AM UTC
When judgments are believed To Be Facts
When judgments are believed to be facts, Especially our own judgments About ourselves, They have great weight and mass, They can crush us like cannon ***** Imprison us like concrete walls. But when we see them For what really they are, Mere thoughts, Often chronic opinions of ourselves, (Perhaps spawned by the Opinions of fools?) Seemingly solid as rock, yet Grounded in nothing, They have no weight, They have no mass, They cannot hurt, nor Imprison us. They are no more dangerous than Snowflakes on our noses, No more confining than A morning fog.
stefan-valicia
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May 28, 2014
May 28, 2014 at 10:49 AM UTC
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