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I fell in love on a black sand beach with boiling sand beneath my toes and a sticky wet breeze at my neck. Your smile, so wide, filled my heart, one tooth at a time. Night swimming, tasting the hot rain, wanting to taste each other. An innocence, and a carnal lust. The sky broke into loud bright lights, the electricity between us. Seeing you was seeing myself. Laughing with you was laughing at myself. Never have I felt so free. Bread and water and you, I was satisfied to the core of my existence. With you I was alive. A look between our mirror eyes, your touch on my sun-ignited skin. Passion. Your ancient soul in a child body. I loved you but the ocean we loved in keeps us apart.
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Jul 15, 2011
Jul 15, 2011 at 5:10 AM UTC
Mirror Souls
I fell in love on a black sand beach with boiling sand beneath my toes and a sticky wet breeze at my neck. Your smile, so wide, filled my heart, one tooth at a time. Night swimming, tasting the hot rain, wanting to taste each other. An innocence, and a carnal lust. The sky broke into loud bright lights, the electricity between us. Seeing you was seeing myself. Laughing with you was laughing at myself. Never have I felt so free. Bread and water and you, I was satisfied to the core of my existence. With you I was alive. A look between our mirror eyes, your touch on my sun-ignited skin. Passion. Your ancient soul in a child body. I loved you but the ocean we loved in keeps us apart.
jos-richter
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South African
Jul 15, 2011
Jul 15, 2011 at 5:10 AM UTC
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