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The officer’s whistle blew and we rose up into the stiff wind of German fire. Whole companies disappeared in the smoke While tangled up in razor wire. Our generals were exposed as fools; Their tactics drawn from earlier wars Our young conscripts, bayonets fixed, were fed into the cannons maw. Nineteen thousand young Brits dead, Thirty thousand wounded more. We gained so little ground that day so little for that blood and gore. A generation raised on tales of the glory and romance of war, has learned today the hard harsh truth Wisdom gained through suffering is universal law.
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Dec 17, 2016
Dec 17, 2016 at 3:22 PM UTC
On that First of July ( the battle of the Somme 7/1/1916)
The officer’s whistle blew and we rose up into the stiff wind of German fire. Whole companies disappeared in the smoke While tangled up in razor wire. Our generals were exposed as fools; Their tactics drawn from earlier wars Our young conscripts, bayonets fixed, were fed into the cannons maw. Nineteen thousand young Brits dead, Thirty thousand wounded more. We gained so little ground that day so little for that blood and gore. A generation raised on tales of the glory and romance of war, has learned today the hard harsh truth Wisdom gained through suffering is universal law.
Like Pickett's charge on steroids
john-f-mccullagh
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Dec 17, 2016
Dec 17, 2016 at 3:22 PM UTC
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