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*your echoes die, your voice is doused by life* the minutiae washed away and ground down to sand dispersed in vesper tides the feel of your touch now just froth and bubble food for fish and crablings last words whispered on the wind, whipped away whilst i was busy, making lists and counting coins oh to hear your shout one last time but no you have left this place and we must look to living and leave the detrius to the sea's forgiveness
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Apr 25, 2016
Apr 25, 2016 at 8:48 AM UTC
doused
*your echoes die, your voice is doused by life* the minutiae washed away and ground down to sand dispersed in vesper tides the feel of your touch now just froth and bubble food for fish and crablings last words whispered on the wind, whipped away whilst i was busy, making lists and counting coins oh to hear your shout one last time but no you have left this place and we must look to living and leave the detrius to the sea's forgiveness
"your echoes die, your voice is doused by life" from Five Bells by Kenneth Slessor the prompt, write a poem using a line from another poets work.
betterdays
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Apr 25, 2016
Apr 25, 2016 at 8:48 AM UTC
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