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Walking on stone pavement, rainy, swift some parts smooth, some parts eroded pebbles at the feet of sandaled soles umbrellas swipe the view, fogging you Cars, bikes, children, zooming against time, and the rush of voices, tones heard and I lose myself in this wave of foreign yet such familiar interference And I find, curled like newborn babes But wizened, people, like in prayer head down, on red, white, blue bags with hands dangling in peace, towards earth Their hands, aged like leaves in a distant land cracks down the back, underneath rough cotton and skin touches skin as I pry yours open only to find a single coin, crumpled with pressure My feet falls behind yours, slackened Your face is filled of golden sand, ready to burst, and I know that your veins know no mercy, as they course hopes through labor At the ground, pitter patter, are the sounds of your breath and gaze And I know we are alike, only difference, decision, the coordinates Pitter Patter Raindrops calling out your feelings, louder than the commotion around us, drenching the ground, drizzling the man-made louder and Louder
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Feb 14, 2013
Feb 14, 2013 at 2:44 AM UTC
A Day in GZ: On a rainy day I found You
Walking on stone pavement, rainy, swift some parts smooth, some parts eroded pebbles at the feet of sandaled soles umbrellas swipe the view, fogging you Cars, bikes, children, zooming against time, and the rush of voices, tones heard and I lose myself in this wave of foreign yet such familiar interference And I find, curled like newborn babes But wizened, people, like in prayer head down, on red, white, blue bags with hands dangling in peace, towards earth Their hands, aged like leaves in a distant land cracks down the back, underneath rough cotton and skin touches skin as I pry yours open only to find a single coin, crumpled with pressure My feet falls behind yours, slackened Your face is filled of golden sand, ready to burst, and I know that your veins know no mercy, as they course hopes through labor At the ground, pitter patter, are the sounds of your breath and gaze And I know we are alike, only difference, decision, the coordinates Pitter Patter Raindrops calling out your feelings, louder than the commotion around us, drenching the ground, drizzling the man-made louder and Louder
A moment during a visit to my ethnic hometown. Musings on a rainy day in a city of people and things. There are those who have everything to work and fight for. Also, a self-reflection on how we are technically the same people, but our fates are very different.
cecilia-kwong
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Feb 14, 2013
Feb 14, 2013 at 2:44 AM UTC
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