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Would u decide To commit suicide Thus instead of boring aging Open up for blasting ending In pursuit for the light Aren't u missing the night What u mean Being mean Breaking bread Baking bad What is u when u scream Ice cream cold unforeseen Heart of steel If it still Would u steal What is real Whom u lie When u cry Would u try Not to die Would u mind Being one of a kind Would u like Go hike
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Apr 4
Apr 4, 2026 at 1:08 AM UTC
Go Hike
Would u decide To commit suicide Thus instead of boring aging Open up for blasting ending In pursuit for the light Aren't u missing the night What u mean Being mean Breaking bread Baking bad What is u when u scream Ice cream cold unforeseen Heart of steel If it still Would u steal What is real Whom u lie When u cry Would u try Not to die Would u mind Being one of a kind Would u like Go hike
Poem was an experiment to find rhythm by throwing verses into LLMs, seeking 3rd and 4th lines to enclose the 1st and 2nd. It’s raw and messy. I enjoyed Claude most; it acted like an editor. Grok was the worst, taking it too personally and staying in character. Gemini was mediocre. To recreate the experiment, throw each verse one by one without rules and see how it responds. Hope u ppl enjoy it ;)
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