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A void untouchable, A bottomless pit. A fear irrational, A piece unfit. The pain unbearable, The looming obit. The thoughts unshakable, The light unlit. Our breaths identical, Our smiling legit. Our days uncountable - I only wish.
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Feb 3, 2014
Feb 3, 2014 at 9:26 AM UTC
Allegories of Missing
A void untouchable, A bottomless pit. A fear irrational, A piece unfit. The pain unbearable, The looming obit. The thoughts unshakable, The light unlit. Our breaths identical, Our smiling legit. Our days uncountable - I only wish.
Total Syllables: 63 Total Lines: 14 Total Words: 36 Amount of times I've thought of you: Immeasurable I would think that last sentence cheesier if it wasn't so true.
drizzt
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Feb 3, 2014
Feb 3, 2014 at 9:26 AM UTC
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