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Coming home, I feel I’m a fan on the stage of an amped up rock show in front of a hyped up crowd, about to dive – will you promise to catch me before my jump turns into a fall? Carry me over your wavelike faces, your hands holding me, floating me over to the dance floor with you all.
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Jan 21, 2012
Jan 21, 2012 at 1:19 PM UTC
crowd surfing
Coming home, I feel I’m a fan on the stage of an amped up rock show in front of a hyped up crowd, about to dive – will you promise to catch me before my jump turns into a fall? Carry me over your wavelike faces, your hands holding me, floating me over to the dance floor with you all.
wrote this before I visited home for Christmas, after a year of living far away
brettin-casie
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Jan 21, 2012
Jan 21, 2012 at 1:19 PM UTC
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