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i said i love you not because you said it first my first love was a bright girl who dreamt of meeting new sunshines before she slept in a hearse my first love will live within my thoughts even when i am on my death bed as my children search for a suit that will fit well on my tired corpse my first love captured my heart at sixteen puppy love that, then, felt like the sweetest dream my father told me you will forget your first love like you forget a daydream but how can this be a thought in the wind when it stays in my mind like a chubby child who enters a candy store can't get rid of his grin - t.m
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Mar 13, 2017
Mar 13, 2017 at 3:44 PM UTC
too mushy
i said i love you not because you said it first my first love was a bright girl who dreamt of meeting new sunshines before she slept in a hearse my first love will live within my thoughts even when i am on my death bed as my children search for a suit that will fit well on my tired corpse my first love captured my heart at sixteen puppy love that, then, felt like the sweetest dream my father told me you will forget your first love like you forget a daydream but how can this be a thought in the wind when it stays in my mind like a chubby child who enters a candy store can't get rid of his grin - t.m
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