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I heard a sorrow in the wind

Sometimes in winter,

a cold wind blows across

the Tualatin valley fields

— inland from the coast

Gathering from the edge

of the western horizon ,

winding down beneath

Tualatin river valley skies

 

The prevailing Westerlies swirl

as they eddy down below

the Rock Island knoll

Where summer love drifted along

afloat in an old red canoe ,

trying to catch the summer breeze

trying to catch the wind

Fleeting memories course ahead

gusting across the Old Willamette

log booms; time soaked and

left behind from the bygone

days they mark

 

The night train’s whistle,

blares 3 times each crossroad passed

Every Canemah crossing

roars a reverberating echo,

Bouncing back and forth

off the valley rock walls

heading down river,

Northbound tracks clatter,

past the falls view cliffs

framing the river below the falls

 

Bellowing whistle blasts

escaping eastbound

beyond Singerhill crossing,

ascending with the wind

at there back, set free up over

the Mt Hood rolling foothills

like a tempest gust rising across

the tawny meadow creek bed

with the sound that sorrow makes

 

Through the open windows

listening with eyes open wide ;

breaking the silence

with the night train’s distant echo

upon this broken hill

Like a leaf upon the breeze

from a far distant horizon,

an aching sigh bellowing

through grieving silence —

coming for to carry her home…..

 

I overheard the maker calling from above

… and I heard a sorrow in the wind

 

 

03/05/2023 — harlon rivers —

published June 6, 2026

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M / Edge of the woods
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I wrote this prose narrative, heart heavy, brokenhearted; intended to be for the memorial service, but couldn’t let go. She always wanted a piper to play “Amazing Grace” to honor her heritage. It was a moment I’ll always cherish. Her parents were Scottish immigrants, landing on Ellis Island with a large family in tow. Mom and dad became childhood sweethearts spending their lives together, now rejoined in heaven. It’s been over three years now, finally letting it go… love is the purpose…

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