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I wish I was deep Able to convey emotions with non-cliché images and metaphors Able to transcend language and words Able to paint images in the minds of others with a complex pattern of syllables But I am not deep I am just sad I wish I was deep Deep enough to drown
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Mar 15, 2018
Mar 15, 2018 at 4:59 AM UTC
I wish I was deep
I wish I was deep Able to convey emotions with non-cliché images and metaphors Able to transcend language and words Able to paint images in the minds of others with a complex pattern of syllables But I am not deep I am just sad I wish I was deep Deep enough to drown
When I first started journaling I couldn’t write anything. I was frustrated with my lack of ability to write and this came out of it
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Mar 15, 2018
Mar 15, 2018 at 4:59 AM UTC
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