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Sometimes I wonder What my life would be like If I had never met you. Not in a spiteful way, Just out of curiosity. Would a new name replace The space You've reserved between my lips? Or would I still be out there, Counting time Between the ticks of my metal detector? Do you remember the metal detector? You know, I always was a treasure hunter. I don't think I ever told you this but, Before we met, I modified it a bit. I was tired of lugging it around, So I put it in my heart. This way, I had nothing weighing me down. I used that ****** thing for years. After a while, though, I got tired of metal. I only ever found scraps, anyway. So I modified it a bit more. Honestly, I barely made it out of that one intact, But it was worth it. This time, I was looking for love. I don't want to run this tangent Into the ground, But I guess what I really want to know is Would my heart ever beat that fast again?
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Oct 5, 2014
Oct 5, 2014 at 9:18 AM UTC
The Metal Detector
Sometimes I wonder What my life would be like If I had never met you. Not in a spiteful way, Just out of curiosity. Would a new name replace The space You've reserved between my lips? Or would I still be out there, Counting time Between the ticks of my metal detector? Do you remember the metal detector? You know, I always was a treasure hunter. I don't think I ever told you this but, Before we met, I modified it a bit. I was tired of lugging it around, So I put it in my heart. This way, I had nothing weighing me down. I used that ****** thing for years. After a while, though, I got tired of metal. I only ever found scraps, anyway. So I modified it a bit more. Honestly, I barely made it out of that one intact, But it was worth it. This time, I was looking for love. I don't want to run this tangent Into the ground, But I guess what I really want to know is Would my heart ever beat that fast again?
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Oct 5, 2014
Oct 5, 2014 at 9:18 AM UTC
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