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Quite admirable , awe-inspiring , a divine piece of manufacture It’s capriciousness is an equivalent of swooning of rapture This carpet conveys itself as flawless , the fragrance is pleasant The glossy finish generates a yearning to have it present The blissful texture is mesmerizing , subject to perfect knitting Not to mention it’s size is perfectly fitting ~ Though the alternative side seems worn and tattered And the fabric surrounding is scattered There are pockets and splits There are strewed fiber bits Along the edges are multicolored spots And the yarn had formed knots ~ At that point the onlooker would become flustered helplessly Were they to take it into their tenancy ? Sure it was depleted And maybe it was slightly untreated Though it was equally handsome Despite it’s opposing filthy expansion ~ Then the beholder would ponder a tad And realize the flaws weren't so bad They were to be contemplated abnormally Though as well stood out morbidly The allotment seemed now suitable And each side was mutable
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Feb 9, 2015
Feb 9, 2015 at 6:03 PM UTC
Perception
Quite admirable , awe-inspiring , a divine piece of manufacture It’s capriciousness is an equivalent of swooning of rapture This carpet conveys itself as flawless , the fragrance is pleasant The glossy finish generates a yearning to have it present The blissful texture is mesmerizing , subject to perfect knitting Not to mention it’s size is perfectly fitting ~ Though the alternative side seems worn and tattered And the fabric surrounding is scattered There are pockets and splits There are strewed fiber bits Along the edges are multicolored spots And the yarn had formed knots ~ At that point the onlooker would become flustered helplessly Were they to take it into their tenancy ? Sure it was depleted And maybe it was slightly untreated Though it was equally handsome Despite it’s opposing filthy expansion ~ Then the beholder would ponder a tad And realize the flaws weren't so bad They were to be contemplated abnormally Though as well stood out morbidly The allotment seemed now suitable And each side was mutable
Designed to stand metaphoric for point of view among society
iAlice
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Feb 9, 2015
Feb 9, 2015 at 6:03 PM UTC
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