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are you looking to save me— or just trying to betray me? beyond that crooked smile, i see the cracks, the lies. paint me a picture of my future, show me how you fracture and divide. your words from a past life cut clean like a knife— tell me, when did you ever think you were right? 'cause all you do is ruin my life. lay it to rest. let it die. i’m not falling for this fight. i can only imagine the day you move past it in another life. and maybe then you’ll see the light. are you looking to save me— or to save yourself?
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Nov 8, 2025
Nov 8, 2025 at 3:42 AM UTC
Save Me (Another Life)
are you looking to save me— or just trying to betray me? beyond that crooked smile, i see the cracks, the lies. paint me a picture of my future, show me how you fracture and divide. your words from a past life cut clean like a knife— tell me, when did you ever think you were right? 'cause all you do is ruin my life. lay it to rest. let it die. i’m not falling for this fight. i can only imagine the day you move past it in another life. and maybe then you’ll see the light. are you looking to save me— or to save yourself?
Written under the echo of Hollywood Undead’s “Salvation.” Sometimes saving someone means losing yourself first.
joshua-phelps
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33/M/English
Nov 8, 2025
Nov 8, 2025 at 3:42 AM UTC
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